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Chris Walter's avatar

You’ve really captured John’s gay yearning so well. He’s clearly conflicted and surprised to walk into the kitchen scene. I like the way you convey his emotions either physical movements like kicking the cans. The story really escalated (in a good way!🥵) and that kitchen scene was HOT!

Bob Vendegna's avatar

Chapter 3 was excellent Roman👌 For someone who has never been to a pool party you did a wonderful job! I wish that I would have been to a pool party like this🎉 I really enjoyed the read! You are absolutely amazing💖

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